In 1999 on December the 25th the day of christmas there was snow everywhere and I was sitting there holding up a sign saying Please help me God I need shelter.
People passing by kicking pushing me around and saying mean things about me like I stink but really I didn't what that meant because I never went to school.
Now I’m about 20 years of age and I still don’t know a lot of words. I went to sleep and a few minutes later someone work me up...
Thursday 22 November 2018
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Hey Lui,I really like your story about Homeless Love. I liked how you used ideas from Christmas. The thing you could work on is you need to check your punctuation. I hope you can finish this story. Keep up the Good work.
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