Pooley the Lui
Lui is the worsted in room 4. He is a pooley lui because he always tries and hide under a desk and poo his pant, we need to change hi pant 10 times a day. When it is morning tea time he always tries and hide in the tuncle so no one can see him and then he tries to poo his pants.At lunch everyone goes outside for lunch but just him that does not go out because he always fats and poos. When it was time for room 4 to come inside they all need to go back out side because the room is so so stinky because lui fat and poos. When the class came in they noticed something there was poop all over the ground and all their shoes were full of poo.Lui was stick in his own poop.His punishment was that he had to clean it all up while the class was talk to mrs lee about what they are going to do.So room 4s plan was that they will make a medicine to make lui not fat or poo.Lui he heard what they were saying so he went and hide.
Its a joke.ok
Hey Lui,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting story, I feel really sorry for Lui! Is this meant to be a funny story? Maybe you should put that it is a joke at the end otherwise people may think it is true!
Hi Miss Morgan
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment on my blog and I think I should all that's was a joke but other then that thank you for the comment.
Hey Lui, I really liked your story it was amazing and absolutely funny. Make sure you re-read it and make sure it make sense also check for punctuation capital letters. Maybe next time you should make stand out more and also and always look for spelling and punctuation. Next time make sure your writing it not difficult and that I can understand it?
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment I will work on it but thank you.
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