Why is teachers important
To whom it may concern,
Teachers are important because they use up all their time to come to school to teach us kids to show respect to other and treat other with respect.
Teacher are helpful to us because they make our lives better and they work hard to get work ready for us so we can have a better future and better behavior.
Teachers are important because the show respect and the younger one look up to them and the do the same and they show respect where ever they go.
The best thing about teachers is that they give us yummy treats.
Yours sincerely,
Lui
Dear Lui,
ReplyDeleteI really like your piece of writing. The first thing that I noticed was the'Why is teachers important'. It should be why are teachers important. Oh and you have a very lonely o in there. You are completely right, they do give up their time to teach us new things everyday. They do defiantly help us with our behavior. You did really well. Keep up the hard work.
From Nevaeh
thank you for the comment and for the feedback and I did work on what you told me that i did wrong.
DeleteHi Lui it is Micah and I like to say what an amazing peice of writing my favorite part in the writing was the end (conclusion) because it says the best thing about teachers is that they give us treats. Maybe next time you can take out the o that is near the bottom.
ReplyDeletethe writing is amazing looking forward to see more Lui.
From Micah.
thanks micah for the comment and I did do what you said about the o
DeleteHi there Lui, Abby Here, I am a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you thought about the teachers and made a peice of writing about why they are the best.
Next time you could check your grammar and your language Also if you could fix the sizing that would be great.
This Reminded me that we should appreciate our teachers.
How long did this take?
Kind regards,
Abby.